Is this a good attention getting device for speech?
According to Asthma and Allergy Foundation of America, about 23 million people including 7 million children today have asthma. Asthma can alter the life of a person but with proper treatment, asmathic people can live full normal lives.
I did not include the definition because I would say it twice. How can I make this better?
Answer by quatt47
Although it may be hard to believe, according to the Asthma and Allergy Foundation of America, as many as 23 million Americans, 7 million of them children, suffer from asthma today. Asthma can seriously alter a person's life, of that there is no doubt, but, with correct treatment, asthmatic people can live full and normal lives.
Answer by Amanda
It really depends on the purpose of your speech. Are you informing people about asthma? Are you persuading people to get treatment for asthma or have their children tested for asthma?
I think it sounds good, but without knowing the purpose of your speech, it's difficult to say with certainty whether or not it's appropriate.
Hope this helps!
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